In Room 10 on Mondays, we are learning to write for other people to read. First, we talk to a buddy and share our ideas. Next, we write our news using the 4 W's. Later, we share our writing with the class and someone can write on our blog.
Come and read our writing....
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Look at us working so hard!
Bryn's Journal Writing:
On a noisy Saturday night my family went to a winery in Waipara called the Mudhouse. It had my Mum's favourite bands. We took my snails, a lantern, a blanket and deck chairs. The concert went until 10 o'clock at night. Everytime I went to the port-a-loo, it shook because the music was so loud! My snails came out because they are nocturnal.
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