Monday, 20 February 2012

We are learning to write for other people to read....

In Room 10 on Mondays, we are learning to write for other people to read.  First, we talk to a buddy and share our ideas. Next, we write our news using the 4 W's. Later, we share our writing with the class and someone can write on our blog.
Come and read our writing....

The 4 'W' questions

Look at us working so hard!



Bryn's Journal Writing: 
On a noisy Saturday night my family went to a winery in Waipara called the Mudhouse. It had my Mum's favourite bands. We took my snails, a lantern, a blanket and deck chairs. The concert went until 10 o'clock at night. Everytime I went to the port-a-loo, it shook because the music was so loud! My snails came out because they are nocturnal.




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